Your poetry reads like a Francois Truffaut movie.

This stark image is ghastly in it's iconic depiction of absurdism. The vivid image of a heavily veiled goldfish's "shivering death" sends chills down my spine as I gasp for breath.

This feels like a dream to me. So vivid yet with a little bit of mystery, the kind of dream that when you wake up you try to cling to the memory so you don't forget what you just had happen inside your head.

IF that makes any sense. lol

I really like this piece and felt it was strong. Different, and I love the idea of the fish bowl. My personal interpretation is a final prayer on your death bed. That in the end, we all die and hope to move on (if that is what you believe in) to bigger and better places. This is definitely an interesting piece, one that makes ya think!

Oh now this i am loooovin!!

with such few lines you just smack imagery out of the park!! i really love the feel os this write because as larry said it has a "ghastly" image to it and the.....do you know what, i dont even know how to describe how this poem effected me lol but it did and i love it x

I really like the way this was written, short but full of mystery. I dont know, but for me, reading this is like listening to one of those Beatles songs, Strawberry Fields kinda thing. Very good.