by The Queen of Spades Sep 24, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My innocence died on a summer night |
Awh this poem made me want to cry! it's soo good! this poem has no words to describe except AWESOME!!!!! ^^ i especially love this stanza |
I think because the poem is so deep in all directions and thought provoking and heart taking... it should be be nominated. You rocked it!! You smacked it!! you explode it....you did it. What can I say? I really became speechless. Thank you so much for sharing such a marvelous piece. You are really brilliant. |
by Autuumnbree
Beautifully written I am a sucker for fairytales and I found this write to be magical. I like that you mention sometines we accept anything to have a pictures or fantasies that only exist in our minds. Excellent. |
by Amreen
I loved this.. You tried to create a movie like scene out here keeping the musical touch intact... Also, you quite convinced the fact that life is not a fairytale and that we cannot long live in that myth ignoring the reality. |
by Mohan
Excelent written, I read it twice i like the begining very much keep writting |