Antidote

by MyHalozChokinMe   Sep 25, 2012


Looking me in the eye

Our bodies entwined

Inside and out

The devil between us,

We dance tonight.

Under each others spell,

Together making heaven

From our own private hell.

Inside we bleed

From wounds that can't be seen,

Strength inside,

Waiting to discover,

We are the antidote

To the poison in each other.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This one flows amazingly, it is so fast and short and can be read again and again with no flaws.

    Inside we bleed

    From wounds that can't be seen,

    - you always have certain lines in your poems that really jump out to me and I connect instantly to them. This was the line from this poem.

    Great job, I love fast flowing poetry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Holy crap.....you're going to find that I usually comment in depth. But can't right now....antidote. amazing title, interesting topic, and that last line just added SO much power to this poem! Loved it!

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Thank you. I was just laughing to myself, although it may not seem like it, this is side of me that I don't usually express in writing. Seems so hard to write things on a happier note. (Yes, this is a "happy" piece for me.)

      Thanks again for reading!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I love this! From start to finish Halo!!

    The words flow.... Its kind of dark and mixed with a sensual feeling to it.... whenever yo u mix spells and poison...Im gonna love it! Well done!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    The emotion you put into your poems always amaze me. The passion in this is remarkable!

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