Crying Sea

by RecycleBin   Sep 25, 2012


Baby it once used to be,
Just you and me,
I stood alone on the alter waiting for you
It felt like hours on a endless tranquil sea.

I've been walking for hours
Accompanied by lonely thoughts
Now You say, I love you
Than how come in your eyes
I see nothing but the dead sea.

Now remembering,
when you laid next to me.
sheets of tear drops,
Blur my face,
And add to tsunami waves
That Ripple my sea.

Baby I'm trying to keep
My head up to the skies..
But wherever I gaze
I can only see,
The dead sea in your eyes

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  • 12 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    I think the way you have linked everything back to the theme of the sea was really thought out and creative.

    I especially like where you said that in her eyes it was a dead sea linking to how she says I love you. It's an amazing comparison.

    Thanks for sharing!
    5.5 from me

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