Moon Stroke

by Ole Carsten   Sep 25, 2012


Filled with emotions while we walked,
a long stroll around the short shoreline while we talked.

From above the full moon were sending beams of silver,
A soft color reflected gently in your hair.

The warm feelings circled in my mind,
the words was hard to find.

With my cheeks in blushing,
All veins open and blood rushing.

Far away rhythms sounded,
A bass constantly pounded.

The sea fragrance blended with perfume,
Was hitting my nostrils loom.

I felt a warm and dizzy at the seams,
Moonbeams, conversations blended themes.

Wishing for a swim covered in beams,
In the pale light of Moon dreams.

In the water only naked feet's,
I could almost hear our heart beats.

The full moon was drawing out the witches,
Vivid they were dancing over the low ditches.

Let join the rhythm and the dance,
Let float around in love trance.

Gently touches warm strokes,
while we were exchanging jokes.

This poem was a part of a weekend challange in the Kite Runner Club

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Great job in the challenge, Ole. I like your take on using the word stroke. To me, the moon symbolizes romance... it always has... walking down the beach hand in hand with the only light beaming from the moon. Lovely imagery :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nice rhymingscheme you got here.
    You stuck with it the whole poem which is not always easy to do.
    The scene you portray is very romantic and sweet. It reminded me of those railwaynovels.

    A good write, keep it up Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very romantic, I love the imagery it makes me feel like I am there walking the shores of the sea. Great Write

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