Comments : Moon Stroke

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very romantic, I love the imagery it makes me feel like I am there walking the shores of the sea. Great Write

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nice rhymingscheme you got here.
    You stuck with it the whole poem which is not always easy to do.
    The scene you portray is very romantic and sweet. It reminded me of those railwaynovels.

    A good write, keep it up Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Great job in the challenge, Ole. I like your take on using the word stroke. To me, the moon symbolizes romance... it always has... walking down the beach hand in hand with the only light beaming from the moon. Lovely imagery :)