Absolutely intriguing pulling the reader in and making them use their imagination. I love this poem it's sweet and sensual and that's what I like about it.

The world that will judge you
for the fact that you embraced me.

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and then no way of return if anyone is jugded by the whole world...
I love this statement, it is final...
good poem

I was honestly intrigued through this whole poem, you left me wondering to where this piece is going to end.

Its different in the way you expressed your feelings, but at the same time I can still say this is written by one.

And that ending statement, OMG T .. it was just so powerful!

Keep it up