by Yakori bint Muhammed Sep 26, 2012
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Life, society /
other
26th, September 2012. |
Good job. I think you can better make it aligned left since you are using punctuation, otherwise you can remove them and keep it aligned centered. I enjoyed the flow. |
by Boy
Well done. though punctuation is not necessary for me. it would be good to know. its very short straight style of poetry. |