Comments : Shadowed

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Well done. though punctuation is not necessary for me. it would be good to know. its very short straight style of poetry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Good job. I think you can better make it aligned left since you are using punctuation, otherwise you can remove them and keep it aligned centered. I enjoyed the flow.