by MyHalozChokinMe Sep 26, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You belly up to me, ready to feast. |
by Baby Rainbow
Ohh, strong ending, well done. I envy you with your talent because you end your poems with such impact, it is like you end them with a bang which is something I struggle to do. great work. |
This is very unique I have to admit I was drew to it and I loved the flow |
Thank you ;) |