Zodiac, Zodiac bla.

by Yakari Gabriel   Sep 26, 2012


Virgos are so full of pride they say,
so full charm they claim
but so dull, I find.

I used to stress
over my zodiac sign..
"best of the best"
I told myself.

I used to be harsh
on virgo women,
whatever decision they made,
whatever flaw they had.

"oh, what a typical virgo trait"

"oh, how un-vigro like"

"oh god, what an insult to the
virgo elite"

and all my virgos,
started looking less and
less ideal to me, not
to talk about those who
were pregnant, all
those virgo girls fell like dominoes
in my eyes

and suddenly,
I found all these late August,
early September girls, boy, women
and men
to be freaks..

to be stupid, stupid,

"oh god, why would you get
pregnant again by the same who doesn't
even feed your child, and why does
she run back to a men who beat her,
and why is can he not see that's she is
cheating, and oh my god....what
does she see in that ugly ducklin anyways"

"sheesh, you're a virgo come on
I expect better from you"

but then,

I fell in love too.

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Uhmm... Not sure what to say.

    But the way I interpreted this piece is that you are also doing the same things as those girls.

    You fell in love, and started to understand them perhaps. :(

    It's sad yet there is more to this piece than what I just thought.
    For instance, there is too much pride in this piece. Which makes it easier to critique people. But towards the end there is the moment of epiphany, the realization that you can now understand them.

    The pride goes away slowly, the critiques too, and you are left with your answer love.

    Very strong poem. Sorry, if I missed interprete it.

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakari Gabriel

      Hahahahah its simple, boo the essence
      of this poem is

      "she was a smart girl, till she fell in love"

      he he

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Yaki....I always like the topics you chose in your writing, especially this one, really spoke to me....your a god damn poetic explosion, this is ufftfvyrrfutgitfutf epic!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Beautiful poem as always, Yaki. Loved your unique choice of themes for most of your poems, the complexity and honesty of your every piece.

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