Comments : Zodiac, Zodiac bla.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Beautiful poem as always, Yaki. Loved your unique choice of themes for most of your poems, the complexity and honesty of your every piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Yaki....I always like the topics you chose in your writing, especially this one, really spoke to me....your a god damn poetic explosion, this is ufftfvyrrfutgitfutf epic!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Uhmm... Not sure what to say.

    But the way I interpreted this piece is that you are also doing the same things as those girls.

    You fell in love, and started to understand them perhaps. :(

    It's sad yet there is more to this piece than what I just thought.
    For instance, there is too much pride in this piece. Which makes it easier to critique people. But towards the end there is the moment of epiphany, the realization that you can now understand them.

    The pride goes away slowly, the critiques too, and you are left with your answer love.

    Very strong poem. Sorry, if I missed interprete it.

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakari Gabriel

      Hahahahah its simple, boo the essence
      of this poem is

      "she was a smart girl, till she fell in love"

      he he