Comments : One Day You Will Miss Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is sadly romantic. To be lingering in the subjects memory till end of time, after you not with this person anymore.

    Someone whom you saw and felt real love through him or her. His or her care and concern has no limits. Encourages you to further be the best you can ever be. Praises your beauty without flattery. Listens to your stories and be with you in moments of glee and gloom. Makes you feel happy always, keeping you distant from sadness. Affection is what binds your chemistry deeply through romance.

    Its simple but evocative of emotions deep within. Flawless and smoothly flowed without any hinges. Lovely piece friend. *smiles* ..

    • 12 years ago

      by Boy

      Thanks for comments. becoz this poem is all about what i felt at that night. means alot to me

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Adele should sing this

    • 12 years ago

      by Boy

      Is that can be sung.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    I related in this poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Love love love this:)
    Very saddening and the pain of love seem so clear in your words. I love the flow and the repetition of the line 'One day you will miss me' as it gives in a poetic flow and also emphasize your true emotions.
    Brilliant piece:)
    Keep writing^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I know how you feel...and one day maybe they will....great write...5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Monik Smith

    This really helped me with some thing i'm going through
    Thank You!!!