by Lune de ma vie
Whoa, wow! |
by Stormy
Wow, loved this one. Very impressive. Each and every line really stood out. Enjoyed the read. Peace. |
You open with a truly beautiful image, I loved what you've painted in my mind. Then I reached the second stanza and sadness began to set in. I thought the rhyme scheme was great, yet I feel like in places it was lost, the last line of the first stanza and the third stanza. |