The End

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 26, 2012


Consume me
Darkness
Consume me

Defeat me
Death
Defeat me.

Drown me
Sorrow
Drown me.

Kill me
Master
Kill me.

Bury me
Soil
Bury me.

Miss me
World
Miss me.

Forget me
Just
Forget me.

Saffie
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  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Omgosh! I love this ! I mean a lot!! I'm finding poets on pnq who use reptition in a good way and I think this is one of them! I love repeating your wishes! Begging for them , the tone it creates, this was great Saf, I really enjoyed this!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I can feel the huge amount of sadness in this piece,, specially at this moment. So touching, great job
    *Sending you s hug*
    :)