I can feel the huge amount of sadness in this piece,, specially at this moment. So touching, great job
*Sending you s hug*
:)

Omgosh! I love this ! I mean a lot!! I'm finding poets on pnq who use reptition in a good way and I think this is one of them! I love repeating your wishes! Begging for them , the tone it creates, this was great Saf, I really enjoyed this!