I watch as evil walks beside you like an old friend whispering words of contentment.
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Woah. Enough said. That was one of the best lines.

Kid, you out do yourself every time! 5/5

Some small typos/spelling errors:
Choose you fate, "you" needs to be "your"
"Satin" needs to be "Satan"

Thank you LostWords^^ I always look forward to ur comments lol^^

How boring this world would be without the fight between good and evil!However some people are never able to decide which side they should take.Loved your piece.Fantastic and powerful!

Loved this very powerful piece!
What a talented writer you are.
Every word packed a punch!
A great write.