Chelsey!! You are writing such great poetry, not that you don't always, it is just I am loving this new way of writing, with such passion, such honesty and you just captivate me with your words
AND
Ben, You work so well with this girl, you are just on the same page, it is amazing how you just fit in writing, you just compliment each other and get it spot on each time

God, I love you guys , I just do...

WOW

I JUST LOVE IT

I'm libra as zodiac, you have touched me much with this

Great job you two, you are so much on the same page it is unbelievable.

You make a great team, I know it is said by most 'but you can't tell who wrote what'

Your minds are entwined at least.

You guys make me smile :) thank you all. This was written in 5 minutes, at random, and wah-la. Apparently we rock . Lol

Thanks guys and yup Chels we do rock lol \m/

i always love it when we write because it either takes five mins or a few hours but how ever long it takes it is always an awesome process and then end result is in my opinion always great :-) love ya loads sweetyx

My ascendant is libra and your poem spoke volumes to me.There is a song by Everything but the girl called "Missing"!and your poem reminded of it because it is one of my favourite songs and because of the chorus although it is a sad song.Just a small part of it.

I step off the train
I'm walkin' down your street again
And pass your door
But you don't live there anymore
It's years since you've been there
And now you've disappeared somewhere
Like outer space
You've found some better place

And I miss you
(Like the deserts miss the rain)
And I miss you
(like deserts miss the rain)

Only a very special kind of love can be compared to the desert/rain for its thirsty of infinity, for its desire of being nourished.Beautiful piece.

Beautiful piece by both of you!!

I am meltinggg! Just in loveee... Good job you guys!