by X Harlea X
I for one, even though in my opinion think that any war is pointless, love this. The way you explained it coming from your mind was incredible. Some points you made were right on the spot, while others I'd like to argue with you about, but I won't. You were completely correct about how everyday is a war within it's self. Whether your in combat, a police officer, fire fighter, or just a regular civilian, we fight within ourselves just to get up out of bed and to deal with what life has thrown at us. This is by far, my favorite by you, even though it was meant as a speech, it had a poetic type to it as well and that's just another thing to love about it. Now my paragraph comment is done lol :) Amazing job ((5)) and officially nominated. |
by Jacob
Absolutely amazing. It inspires me to keep going and press on and fight for what I love. Very well written(: |
by Aubrey
This is really good I like it....:) |