Comments : Slumber

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    I like this poem! It has a dark but intimate feel to it that drags the reader in. Amazing

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I too thought this had a dark vibe in it. It is somewhat mysterious too and I suppose can be interpreted in many different ways.

    I like the line " you invaded my sleep" - this jumped out to me and made me think of all the things which come into my head when trying to get to sleep, and the things that I dream of. all the things that I also wish I could sleep to get away from. Vicious cycle.

    Well worded little poem.

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Part of what I have come to love about this community, is being able to read how other people see my stories when they read them.

      This one is simple, really.

      I find myself enamored by someone that I only see in my dreams.