Harlea, I love the nature and love, word display within this piece.... it very pretty...the flow and format is wonderful.... very elegant... love this!!

Aweeesome!!

omg this is a fantastic write, i love nature and i love love poems and this has a wonderful mix of the two....what i also like....and this might sound a bit strange buuuut if you take the first line of each stanza it makes a beautiful write on its own two...sorry my brain is a little active today lol

Beautiful write x

This was romantic, Harlea!

Just what I needed on this gloomy and dark Autumn day. I could picture two young people in love as I read it.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Loved this . so romantic. i could vision it . reminds me of how I wish could say this to the guy I like but naw. very good