Let It Burn

My Queen, I love this.
The repitition works wonders for this and transforms it into a song.

There is great anger and hurt throughout this, good to see great emotion in your writing.

The second stanza is awesome, you are basically telling him to 'do one'

the strength in stanza 4 is awesome

and of course you can reign today 'my queen'

You could make hits, I tell you, HITS. You're such a great songs lyricist.

Beautiful job, Meme:)

This poem made me think of breaking up
somebody the persona in your poem love and he just left her so she is cursing him haha JK lol
it is a deep piece for sure a desperate person just started to gather up her power after a painful break.
I sensed a beat in your poem I also like the rhyming
and the way you started and ended the poem with the same stanza was just spectacular

good write =)

This piece made me vision a man in boots that were on fire...walking down a highway... sorry sweets but Im loaded on coffee ha ha

Seriously... this poem is deep,,, and the message is somber and yet filled with strength.. sometimes a true heart needs to let the fire burn out... this tugged at my heart... touching piece!!