I kinda really liked this poem, good job.

It just came out to my idea of unwritten poems, too many drafts to create a perfect poems

Wow really cool.
"silent room, a whispers mute
tiny light blinded by a shade,
spectators waiting for a show,"
That stuck out to me a lot, excellent write.
Keep it up, surprised you don't have many comments you have really good writings.
5/5

Wow, love the courtroom appearance in the beginning of this poem, using the jury and witnesses! Creative opening!

I like the choppy feel tot he poem, they way you have broken this piece up and made it keep going smoothly, yet fast, this worked well for me.

I love the title you picked for it, so powerful and eye catching. I also relate as I have a bunch of paper scattered places that I never finish, or never like enough to post, but do not find time or motivation to go abck and edit them.

Anyway, I enjoyed this!

Wow...I love this. Wonderful!