Wow I love the ending....

"Rhythm of our heartbeats, played a melody
together we are the witness of the love we made,on this day, here comes the precious memory"

Very deep and touching... Keep it up!!

Beautiful! I always forget how much I enjoy love poems, it is not a category I visit often, but this poem makes me glad I do, as the wording here was really enchanting and romantic.

I love how you made the empty space seem filled just by the love itself, this is lovely, and I think it shows the strength of the love.

Nice work my friend.