Very creative and with a good message in it as well!
Well done,
5/5 Ingrid
12 years ago
by Lostlove1
ForgottenSoul
WOW this is different...I am thinking I really like it but: I dont think it needs all those **** I would take all of them out, seriously they are distracting and not needed.
Lies secrets and talents ofthe*unusual*
^^^space
Pull the part (i hope you like it...) down away from the poem :)
This is really deep and would really like to see it edited. Unless each of those ** mean something hidden inside this piece. IDK I haven't had coffee yet lol.
Lostlove~
Like and unsteady *racehorse* you run
^^an not and...
from my glare.