Comments : Complex System

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    LostWords what a lonesome poem. Sometimes when it's quiet memories scream in the silence...Hope you find your smile again :) Always try to look towards tomorrow- what a difference a day can make! Nice write. This too shall pass...

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you LostLove. I love to write because even if I am going through something tough, after I write about it I can smile again.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Yes LW... Its always sad to be in alone and remember the past, no more a part of our present but the thought of the course of life can help heal any pain and despair...
    Good emotions shown here and just great...
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Alone in the world
    Without a smile on my face
    I sit here and remember
    The memories we once shared

    I hv too been lost in myself thinking
    About memories. Alone in the world.
    Exactly how we all feel.

    Being by myself drives me insane
    Stuck in the labyrinth
    Thinking I might escape it one day
    Using the future to elude the present

    We feel as though we need that person
    Back when they won't even give us a
    Second look. Labyrinth perfect way to
    Describe it.

    Nothing in life lasts forever
    Eventually everything runs its course

    What an interesting way to end it and it works
    To its fullest. Give the reader something to think
    About. A well thought up poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Yup, That's how it works.

    Nothing in life last forever, eventually, it has to end.
    But when something ends there is the option for something new beginning. It's all right to look back at the past but only for reassurance and to learn from it, and the way humans usually learn is by getting hurt sadly. Nice piece.

    Makes one think.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Amreen, you are right. It can help heal any pain. Thank you!

      Thank you for the well thought comment Forgotten Soul. I'm glad someone understands how I feel. Stuck.

      Everlasting, I always try to leave a little something for my readers to pander about. I'm glad I got you thinking. You are right, when something ends there is a new beginning for something else.