Comments : Journey into my ill mind pt1

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Excellent written gud description

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Very nice flow sweetie and the darkness is beautiful great poem

    *Lady Donia*

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Wow...so amazing:}

  • 10 years ago

    by Kakera

    We all came from this mistress. And we fight. Our war with the mistress is all we have to keep going. Survival is the hardest war to fight in after all. You didn't give in. You won the battle, but you will never win the war. Such is our Mistress. She may be irritated at you slipping through her reach all the times she's longed to kiss you, but she can wait.

    Thee will rejoin her, she will have you. She's possessive and cruel, a tyrant -- and she will have you.

    To quote game of thrones: "There is only one God, and *her* name is Death. And there is only one thing we say to Death -- Not Today."

    She is my mother-in-law, but not yours. She will love you eternally, but I will not let you have her until I've made love to her daughter unrequited -- for it is not your time yet.

    And now, my cigarette is also consumed.