This poem is very well written again i will say punctuation is not necessary.

Lush pain deafened my thoughts,

its very good line. you used the first word very strongly. good work friend

Yakori, this is amazing!! Loved the nature in this piece. I often find no matter the topic, adding nature metpahors seem to make a poem totally beautiful.

I love what you're saying here. Sometimes we go througn trials in life. Get blinded, feel defeated, exhausted, but in the end, sometimes its just a blessing in disguise and something that needs to happen.

Awesome poem, awesome message. Loved this!

Excellent... I just loved the clever descriptions and the thoughtfulness. also the flow is good and the poem needs deep thought to know the skin of this... Beautifully written:)

I get this idea of being desperate and powerless and hopeless. But sometimes, we can see the brighter side of pain, that we gain hope once again.

I rippled like a stone in the pond,
sinking me open to hope.

^ This simile is creatively penned, almost like the crux of your idea. Lovely write, Yakori!

I really relate to this poem, i think we all go through troubles or tribulations in life and your vivid description was amazing but what i lied the most were the uplifting words towards the end of the piece, amazing as usual