Comments : Breathe

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This didnt sound like you were suggesting being selfish or taking risks at all! It sounds like a poem advising the reader to cherish every moment while they can because life is so short. I thought this was very well penned and loved the title as well. I can relate. :) very nicely done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    The little things in life are all that matter, live for today. Life is too short to be anything but happy... cherish every single thing you can. :)

    I love the message of this poem, very nice.