Comments : Dearest Mother

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This is beautiful and really sad because when someone dies (esp. a parent) There is so much we wish we could change or have done differently...but time runs out for everyone and all we are left with are memories and regret. Well penned and I actually got a little teary eyed reading...but check this part:

    just push
    You away and break your them in fluid
    Motions.

    ^^

    I love this piece from you,
    Lostlove

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful. I can relate to your words.

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Thank you Karla^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Ohh FS... this one is so touching.... Parents are always like a guiding light and their absence and value can never be filled by anyone.... I loved the way you have penned this...it brings out true emotions...
    Well done(:

    • 12 years ago

      by Alanis

      Thanx Amreen^^

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    This is beautiful and full of hope, despite it being sad in a way.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    This is beautiful and full of hope, despite it being sad in a way.