Yea, I'm talking about you

by Meme   Sep 29, 2012


Go ahead and sugar coat
every word you tell them,
just fake your way into
their lives, a master is who
you are in what you do.
You have the art of using
words to manipulate an
addiction into their lives,
you draw an illusion into
their brain that you are
trustworthy, that you will
always be there for them.

Thank you for once telling
me not trust a man by his
words, because all you have
to offer is words. You sold
me a pink cliche of lines, just
like the ones you're promoting
now. And I stand there to bear
witness others being charmed
by your phony acts, but not
me not any more. Go take your
empty words and remember
that it was me who once taught
you how to pick a pen and write.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Kylead

    Geuss ill be the first to admit i read this and i thought you were writing about me kinda sad i geuss but i really liked it gave me something to think about and ill ponder
    5/5 btw i think its like me cause sometimes i can be a downright horrid human being and other times i can be the best of me

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Haha, no no not about you :P
      And thanks a lot for the comment :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Wow, this is what you call a vicious poem.

    The person that is portrayed sure has a bloodthirsty enemy on his back.

    You are right to attack these people who offer sweet words but are not serious about it.
    We men can be rude and insensitive that is true. But please do not think that we are all alike. Some of us do have a soul and mean what we say and write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Wow, this is what you call a vicious poem.

    The person that is portrayed sure has a bloodthirsty enemy on his back.

    You are right to attack these people who offer sweet words but are not serious about it.
    We men can be rude and insensitive that is true. But please do not think that we are all alike. Some of us do have a soul and mean what we say and write.

    So don't give up on us ;)

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      I would never give up when there are some like you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I'm not sure if it's just anger what I felt in this piece of if it was mainly disappointment.. probably a mixture of the two.

    Sugar coating words and speaking words and saying that he is trustworthy.. but they are only words. That rang a bell in my head. This is well written Meme.

    and definitively it has some words that I will remember.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Somebody has got on the wrong side of you hey
    love the anger through this.
    short sentences help the pace flow smoothly.

    great job, I will ensure I will stay on your good side

    ; - )

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Hahaha, you are Darren you are :)

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