OMG!!

Ok first thing about this poem which is only my eye's view and probably no one elses but it came straight to my head at the end of this. For me the shape is like love hearts. It is like seperate heart shapes and then the end is like your heart in a shell, which is exactly what the stanza is about!

Such a powerful poem, I truly get these emotions and thank you for expressing them so clearly.

I feel like I don't hae to write anymore because someone else is taking my emotions and writing them for me... its great lol xx

Another thing about this poem is the beat it had to it, it holds a flow like a song, some small repitition in the background while the main lyrics are being sung. I could honestly picture this being turned into a song.

Umm...you better keep writing!

Just sayin...

Love the format and shape within this piece!!

I had to say that first off... now

the message is something that I have been tangled up in within my own mind as well... so I can relate to this piece... I admire your expressions of emotions ..... it leaves the reader entranced... from start to finish! awesome write!