I was waiting for you to write a piece like this (should be in love poems BTW lol) and I have to say im not disappointing, as always word usage and flow wonderful, this piece has an almost dream like quality very graceful and elegant which I just love and now ive seen one like this I wanna see more!.(the pubic is very demanding eh?).

as for the title.....i literally spat my morning coffee out
hahahahaha

great write sweety

I feel this is quite different from your usual stuff, but I enjoyed it still and you still had your signiture on it with your word choice and flow. Keep it up