You took insomnia and created a very unique piece... I loved the way you ended it with tiny blue pill.... I also admire the repetition of "beat" I think my heart went in rhythm as I read this piece :-) love this!!

Thank you -- for writing such a common routine that we go through with this. It was great creativity using the word beat in repitition as fast as it would go when we are trying to sleep. You described this well.