The shape of this poem looks like an old vintage bathing suite...mhm.

You are right it does! ha ha ha

Lovely piece by the way, poignant, simple
and to the point :) well done sugar

This was very touching Maple, the beginning really spoke to me with your line " breaking the silence of yesterday" This line holds a lot of power and can relate to so many things in our lives.

This poem of yours is one of the few which you write, in that every person could read this differently and take different things from it. I like poems like that x