Not returned back

by Khalid M Darwish   Sep 30, 2012


Four things, if gone won't come back
The word whenever released
The arrow whenever thrown
The time whenever wasted
And the dignity if lost

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A honest write... I mean the message of this piece is so clear, direct and holds so true... We must look before we leap... And you always have something wonderful to share which I love the most...
    Beautiful(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A honest write... I mean the message of this piece is so clear, direct and holds so true... We must look before we leap... And you always have something wonderful to share which I love the most...
    Beautiful(:

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    I love the deep emotion and absolute sincerity of this piece.

    For a short piece you, once again and as always, have shown such depth of content. From start to finish the piece was superb.

    My only critique would be to alter the title by removing 'back' from the end. In my head, 'return' and 'back' are almost synonymous and in this instance seems unnecessarily added.

    Well penned! 5/5

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