I love the deep emotion and absolute sincerity of this piece.

For a short piece you, once again and as always, have shown such depth of content. From start to finish the piece was superb.

My only critique would be to alter the title by removing 'back' from the end. In my head, 'return' and 'back' are almost synonymous and in this instance seems unnecessarily added.

Well penned! 5/5

A honest write... I mean the message of this piece is so clear, direct and holds so true... We must look before we leap... And you always have something wonderful to share which I love the most...
Beautiful(:

A honest write... I mean the message of this piece is so clear, direct and holds so true... We must look before we leap... And you always have something wonderful to share which I love the most...
Beautiful(: