I just loved your progression in this beautiful piece. Innocently weaved from one line to the other. Describing the scenario very vividly, strong imagery going on here. You describe every detail in such a poetic way without narrations.

I'm not familiar with this form but you nailed it exceptionally. First dates are quiet memorable but can fade away with time but never forgotten. Let me be emphtaic on what really streaked me. I admired how you painted the innocence of these teens, possibly.

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Welldone dear. *hugs* :-) ..