Haloz....DAMN IT!!!

You really just blew me away with this write, it is just mesmerizing and draws you in and before you know it youve read it ten times!!

I love love poetry and i love writing them too but sometimes i get a bit too wordy, this wasnt wordy atall (that isnt quite meant to sound as it reads lol) and you just captivate the reader with the simple but strong and not cliche lines - something in love poetry that is actually hard to do yet you made it look effortless....

Straight into my favs where i can read it until my toes fall off!!

awesome write!!!

I loved this!! Seriously amazing job with the challenge. I love the first stanza and how you basically list the process of listening to someone, into the ears, to the brain, then touches your heart.

Loved the second stanza and how it basically shows weakness and that no matter how hard you try to brush this person off, their love has really infected your soul. Awesome write!

This was really deep I loved it , it was so hard to pick one , well done :)

Thank you.

I do relate so much more to your other one, which is why I prefer it. But I do like this one and the different side you took with this. Your talent is really shwoing when you take the same word and come up with totally different poems. Well done for this.