Tarantulas

This is a very clever poem, very imaginative (I don't think I've ever seen a poem written like this before). I think it's too clever for me, haha xD. You're a very talented writer :)

It seems like you took alot of time to write this :) I like it alot xD

This was so hard to read but really challenging for the reader! I can imagine and appreciate how much time and effort this took for you to write.

Great job. Well done for the challenge.

Its good i think was a little short but don't think your refering to spiders at all i think you were comparing to people so i liked it but you know readers prepective and all all 4/5

This was sooooooo creative and I never would have guessed you wrote this! Well, I guessed you wrote on the topic, but the wording and the "choppiness" of this piece I actually really loved when usually I'd think a choppy poem needs more structure. This worked for you! Loved all the "t's". You did well with this challenge!