Comments : The Pianist

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Let me tell you T, the title itself just made me want to read this poem. And since the piano is my favorite musical instrument I was sohappy to see it used metaphorically in a poem. Theindications and similes were spot on.

    And I also loved that you mentioned the names of those great musicians. It added just another element for me to love this piece even more.

    Very well written :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I really like this poem it short but unique, I like that you used the piano as the base for creating a love story. Great write...

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This was great, the ending surprised me though... Going back to school to continue learning about music?

    But overall, keep this up too. And see you say you have inspiration.. You just prove yourself wrong :-) lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Thomas I loved this...I loved adding the names of pianist to this piece, and I find it weird that I knew all of them. haha!

    This is beautiful to compare you and a lover to a piano and pianist, colliding as one, making a melody like no other. Very Creative! :)