Wow a very vivid and powerful piece, creatively describing the gloomily darkness of a tombstone, I love the word choice which effectively suits the tone and sequence of is acrostic form.
Kept me captivated the whole way through

Well penned
5.5

Gahhh! I never would have guessed your wrote this!! I almost voted for it! I had no idea who wrote it. I loved it! Such an interesting topic!

I loved the tone most in this piece, and too be honest, the power in your tone almost doesnt make this a sad piece for me.

Now it's time to reap what you sow, spending
Eternity in a box under., the tombstone.
^ There is so much power and confidence in that statement :)

Really great acrostic you did awesome with the challenge.

Your tone in this piece was very strong and loud. Its like you were aiming to be heard with every words you said, and oh yes you definitely will be heard with such a piece. The choice of words you chose were very smart, and considering this was anacrostic piece with limited lines you actually did the title its justice.

Well done!

Love what you have done here, this dark poem has great images, awesome!!!

It's quite funny as I just read your sleeping beauty poem and was like awwww and then started to read this and was like wow, totally different.

That is awesome!

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I loved that you chose a formed poetry because I don't often see you do these, and it fitted very well witht he challange and the word you picked.

your poem was very powerful and I loved the depth you took to it. Well done.

The tone of this poem is the best feature in my opinon. Especially this part:

My name? You will find out soon enough
Being banished for surviving is a crime
itself,
Seems unfair for you mortals to eat your
prey.
^
The way you used mortals made the persona more powerful, it made it more memorable.

Only you are to blame, you think your
superior;
^
your should be you're.