This breaks my heart. Abuse of any kind is so unacceptable and wrong and I just can't stand that people have the nerve to lay a hand on another person. Its so sad. I will never understand why you want to bring someone pain?

Sad sad write Saf!

So you like it? Lol. I agree, I got a job as a babysitter and that's all we see. I understand they get out of hand but there's a better way to get them to listen

Wow, this is so powerful because you have created a scene which could be one of many. This could be a parents choice of discipline, it could be children in an prhanage it could be mistreated children in the foreign countrys and just so many things. It doesnt matter which one you have in your head because they all hold the same amount of power and the bottom line is, no child should have to go through this fear.

Great poem.

Thank you so much =)