I never knew this was yours lol

It's really diffrent I think but it really shows how talented you can be well penned

Chels :)

Woah.. This was just.. wow. Stunning write. It's dark and depressing and I love the imaginary. You used a wide rang of words and it told a rather sad story. I wish I could pull you away from all of the dark thoughts. Your poetry is incredible.

Danika.

I KNEEWWW THIS WAS YOURS, woooohooo and I love this poem. Was waiting for it to be posted.
The use of halloween/Trick-or-treat as a Metaphor is sooooo smart.
Awesome job Chels :)

Chelsey I love this completely! So quite unique. It's a shame we don't celebrate Halloween here like you guys do in the states. It looks like fun!!!

I have to say though I love that you have compared this person to halloween. It's like they are always hiding behind a mask even if it is not that time of year. I love what you have written here but I must say that I am surprised that it is in the sad poems. Yes there is a sadness to it but I can feel a darkness to it as well, especially with the use of halloween.

Awesome, awesome Chels!

x

I really love this write... very creative! Filled with all t he flavors of Halloween and yet the sadness of a failed relationship... really a mixture of fun and sorrow... well done!

" and fly out of here on my broom stick."'

^^ So that's where the broom has been all along... I have been looking for it. lol but turns out that you have it with you and here I was thinking that Emily had it haha..

Sorry, I couldn't resist. Every time I see broom, I remember that thread.

Okay, now back to the poem. I thought it was really smart to include the broom and to show that you are prepare and ready for the unexpected. That's good, we never know what will happen but at least we should be ready for anything. Specially for guys who just like to play the trick or treat...

I like the use of Halloween, it's haunting. so difficult to ignore, it grabs the reader's attention right away.

Awesome job, Chelsey

Wow chels... This is so awesome... using a story to describe your pain and anguish is so creative and brilliant... it is depressing and brings out true raw emotions...
Well done gal:)

I loved this Chels Chels. This was so creative for the challange and I loved your idea and how you went with this.

I didn't realize that trick-or-treat was a guessing
game. Didn't know I'd have to question, which kind
of night would I need to prepare for.
- this was so well written here and the idea of it being a game, but not the way the children see it as a game but more one of a phsycological one.

Really loved it, well done on this one. xx

Chels...this was very eirie...very well written and had me biting my nails. It was spookyness at the max...the lantern still hanging out there in May..the charades you had to play..never knowing which character you were expected to perform to....creepy!

and then..you became a witch and took off on your broomstick I guess?...totally stretched my imagination and...it's not even halloween yet...loved it!