Behind all 'good-bye', there's 'welcome'. He who brings you pain, helps you learn.

A wonderful flawless poem.

OMG! This is a poetic journey having a poetic love. The transfer of love from a poetry style to another makes this piece attractive. Your first stanza reflected a good opening of the story, especially with the expression of "freshness of a haiku". Also your ending with "melodies" although I preferred the "my lost love" to be "our lost love". Moreover, you revealed the importance of rhyming in increaing the poem's (or love) coordination. Furthermore, you chose the sad type of ghazel which makes your love unique, going parallel with being a lost love.
I really support your resembling of your lost love with special poetry styles.
I encourage you writing such touching poems. Brilliant as always.

I was spellbound reading this poem Amreen.
You truly are a very gifted writer!
Such beautiful words you use in your poems.
I truly am in awe of your talent!

Every moment without you is
like a freestyle verse
which lacks the rhyme of life
as you took away the contentment of this journey..

Unique as ever..

~ Simply a masterpiece and perfect imagery!

5/5!

O.m.g.
i am in love and in awe...this is brilliant.
i am on my phone right now..it will take me years to write what i want, so ill be back to edit soon!!!
<3

Your love was like
the freshness of a haiku
which perched on the windows of my heart
and delivered letters of affection..

I love this part, reminds me of a messenger owl
From Harry Potter.

I remember our meetings
symbolising the passion of a love sonnet,
charmed with the tunes of our endless talks
to play our serenade forever...

This part was very visual and painted
Pictures as detailed as a experienced painter

All and all a beautiful poem. Keep writing

I remember our meetings
symbolising the passion of a love sonnet,
charmed with the tunes of our endless talks
to play our serenade forever...
i loved this part lot!!
n this one too..

My state without you is like a sad ghazel
which yearns for your care and love,
but you moved on like a song
singing the melodies of our lost love...

such powerful words..well done Amreen..
i really really loved it!
*_*

The idea.
I really enjoyed how you integrated the types of poetry into your poem. I thought that was very clever and you seem to describe the forms whilst also desribing your lost love.

Detail.
It didn't have too much detail, sometimes heaps works, but I think in this case you have chosen wisely with the amount of detail you have written.

Imagery.
I kind of kept picturing words fading away like with your love the words left too, because they were your muse, your inspiration.

Flow.
The flow was generally flawless though it appears that it wouldn't be. lol.

Emotion.
To some degree I feel a sense of emotional detachment. I don't think this was your aim. It has plenty of emotion in there, but I feel like it is lacking slight, perhaps because of your theme of 'incorporating poetry forms'.

Title.
I think the title is too straightforward, it lacks the surprise of the poem, but then again becuase of your creativity, it also doesn't. It's a bit of a pickle. lol.

Overall,
I really like the piece. I love the originality. You have such talent and I am very glad you put it to good use. Your work is always a delight to read, even the heavy messages.

Excellent.
Five/Five

I'd like to say first off, all the poems I've read that had to do with poems, such as talking about them, or the process of writing, we're so dull. Repetitive and had loss of flow.

This, is great. I love the style and wording.

"Every moment without you is
like a freestyle verse
which lacks the rhyme of life
as you took away the contentment of this journey..."
^^^this was my favorite line.

This poem really kept me hanging in the beauty of poetrie and its connexion to love itself.
I love how you used terms related to writings and even speech such as haiku,letters,talks,syllables...all in the use of the theme of this lost love.

The piece is full of emotion regardless the fact that it contains simple things.. great work!
5/5

This is beautiful *_*

A very interesting piece, it speaks to poets in particular due to all of the poetic forms you use as metaphors. it was interestingly circular as far as thought went while reading it, that the poem was beautiful, in that it alluded to the beauty of poetry.

i cant say im generally a love poem fan but this one wasnt bad at all, and i quite enjoyed reading it.

Really beautiful, full of a lot of emotion and I like how it explains the love of one and shifts to heartache.. Love is really hard, not only is it the greatest of all feelings in life but the most painful also. I just felt a deep longing of nostalgic in this piece you were able to give the reader insight on your feelings, great job.

This poem is like love at first to me, I just fell inlove with it instantly. Quiet sad to see love that was bound by efforts of committment to start vanishing like a smoke. Hurting and disheartening but one needs to let go when its not worht it.

When you're not meant to be, you can never be. What will be, will always be; 'Que sera sera'.

The incorporation of poetry forms gave it an examplary unique structure. Very impressed with that, it gets one loving this gloomy but beautifully written work. Straight from the heart and paints quiet a lucid image.

Keep up churning such exotic poems. Bon Travail! Blessings.. :) ..

I liked this. It seemed simple to me but had a lot of emotion. Great job.

This is an amazing poem! You done a great job!

Wow this is a good one i liked it a lot

Okay this poem is VERY pretty! :) i love the flow of it all and just the simple fact that it makes me smile at all is a miracle since i don't normally smile when reading poetry about love for some reason or another lol this is a great poem i hope you and i can make a collab one day lol

Queen Ash