Really emotional and powerful.
Great work, another one I can relate to in a sense.
You've got to stay strong and keep that head up.
You did a great job here putting emotions into words.
Amazing.
5/5

I really loved the message in this poem.

At first I thought it was like a sweet love story, and that this person was damaged and you were trying to help heal her and fix her. So I waited on when she would accept this. But instead what I found was that she was never treating you nice and indeed it was you fighting for her all the time.

I seen this person as fake, and two faced. showing one side to other people who thought she was sweet and innocent. like perhaps you did too. But then she shows the other side to you that is the opposite.

I like the rubix cube and jigsaw- like you can just never understand the puzzle of her and what she wants from you and why she is this way with you. To leave them unfinished later on was so harsh, it shows you gave up after trying for so long.

Then to end the poem with a predator and prey trying to be friends, just showed how impossible this relationship was going to be.

Very powerful.

A few suggestions -

I'm exhausted to solve this rubix cube

- I'm too exhausted.

You look very innocents

- innocent.

You are that gems

- gem.

I admit I'm a bit little loser,

- you need to change the wording here, either:

I'm a bit of a loser
I'm a little bit of a loser

something like that .. would sound better.

But did enjoy this poem and the story.