Covers

by Thomas   Oct 2, 2012


I need to see
what you're about
I want to feel the need
to have you around

So that I can really show
the feelings that I have inside
Now I already know
that for you I will kill my pride

To me you're divine
cause you shine your light on me
Illuminating my dark soul
all the way through the night

Now I can find the way
to the place of your worship
Between the covers of embrace
there will only be tongue slips

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  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    THOMAS, OH WOOOOOOOOOW!!!

    Thats all I needed to read. You are magnificent just like this piece you penned. The opening verse was so capturing, it gave me a sense of vulnerability a sense of need and I love it! And surrendering your pride to someone shows that the person really means the world to you, because with love comes sacrifices.

    You penned a wonderfully lovely piece :)

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Now I can find the way
    to the place of your worship
    Between the covers of embrace
    there will only be tongue slips..

    I love this end by u..

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is certainly sweet. It has heart and merit. There is soul and light. The words are excellent the rhymes are nice. The style is well done and the flow is smooth. Your voice shines bright and your love is clear. Great piece. Love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Romantically sweet, it's true some people have this glow about them that seems to bring light into the souls of those around them. I like your writes and enjoy the sudden rhyming. Sweet...

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