Romantically sweet, it's true some people have this glow about them that seems to bring light into the souls of those around them. I like your writes and enjoy the sudden rhyming. Sweet...

This piece is certainly sweet. It has heart and merit. There is soul and light. The words are excellent the rhymes are nice. The style is well done and the flow is smooth. Your voice shines bright and your love is clear. Great piece. Love it.

Now I can find the way
to the place of your worship
Between the covers of embrace
there will only be tongue slips..

I love this end by u..

THOMAS, OH WOOOOOOOOOW!!!

Thats all I needed to read. You are magnificent just like this piece you penned. The opening verse was so capturing, it gave me a sense of vulnerability a sense of need and I love it! And surrendering your pride to someone shows that the person really means the world to you, because with love comes sacrifices.

You penned a wonderfully lovely piece :)

xxx