I really like the way you composed this piece connecting to the title with each stanza separated into the senses they link to. I found this in itself was very effective.
I love the inspirational words you constructed in each line it really set a positive tone and it brightened up my day.
I love the line where you stated
Break the chains of silence
This in itself Is so strong and powerful verbalising such depth it's incredible.
Great write
5.5 from me