Comments : Look, Hear, Say, Feel

  • 12 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    I really like the way you composed this piece connecting to the title with each stanza separated into the senses they link to. I found this in itself was very effective.
    I love the inspirational words you constructed in each line it really set a positive tone and it brightened up my day.
    I love the line where you stated
    Break the chains of silence
    This in itself Is so strong and powerful verbalising such depth it's incredible.
    Great write
    5.5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Beautiful poem!

    5/5!