I am going to nominate your piece tomorrow.Thats awesome!

Beautiful girl, you have written such a lovely nature piece here. The words were simply captivating, the image astounding, I loved this piece. Nature pieces don't get to me much, but this one did. Loved every bit of it!

I love poems about nature, when they're done well. This poem did not disappoint, It gave off a good sense of imagery and for the most part I could imagine/feel what was being said in the poem. I enjoyed reading this a lot, good piece.

This is beautiful yakori... It is thoughtful, descriptive and speaks so lovely.... I love the entire picture drawn by your words ..:)

Nature poems really soothe a weary soul. And this is no exception. Your wording felt magical to my ears. I could feel everything!

Your wording is brilliance. I thin i was really missing out on great pieces.

I can't express the feelings that ran through my mind within this beautiful nature poem. I was swept away into a wonderland of words! Writing about the seasonal fruits of nature.... Love the title! It always intrigues me how creative writers can be when describing nature and Yakori really took me on a fun and enchanting nature adventure. Very soothing piece!!

"Carving lines through my withering face,
rustle of leaves wash away my wishes,
to gather moments of gusty peace. "

Leaves have a way of bringing peaceful thoughts about and within the soul, this poem was rich in beauty and word display... love and admire this poem very much~